Jane Espenson (from interview with Advocate.com)
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Strengthening Description
Exercise –
Write a descriptive scene without the use of any adjectives or adverbs.
Goal –
Adjectives and adverbs can be that extra sprinkle a scene needs. You might have heard the phrase “The road to hell is paved in adverbs”, a quote from Stephen King’s book, “On Writing”. But have you seen that quote in it’s necessary context?
Using adverbs and adjectives most effectively often means to learn how to write without them, that way you know each time you use them, and that way you can focus on using them only when a stronger verb or sentence structure or what have you won’t suffice. You might be using these modifying words more often than you think you do.
So, in this exercise, use only strong words in your passage. No adjectives. No adverbs.
If this exercise doesn’t make you cry, or at least break out into a sweat, you are a master of the universe.
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My OwnSorryAttempt –
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Write your character being taken care of by someone younger than them.
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Make a lax scene tension filled.
That very childish bit of my mind immediately thought laxative scenes filled with tension- too easy.
luckystrikesme asked: Would you please give an example of two paragraphs of the same subject where one is “showing” and the other is “telling”? I just can’t seem to tell the difference.“Show, don’t tell” is a prime example of an idiom phrased so vaguely…
Anonymous asked: I’d like to know the specifics of what goes into a query letter, and if that should be the very first thing I send to an agency? Thank you.
For your pleasure, a smorgasbord of links on the wide world of queries and agents! But first, what are these things?
Planning to write is not writing. Outlining, researching, talking to people about what you’re doing, none of that is writing. Writing is writing. -E.L. Dotorow
So I don’t know about everyone else, but I think one of the most enjoyable parts of the process of writing a novel (or short story or…